Pitch for my 7.5 minute slot

We where asked to create a 5 minute pitch to Ed Stagg about what we plan to do in our slot of the 60 minute. I created a few key points and wrote out a script to help me during it so i could add enough content and meet as many of the key terms i had to during the pitch. The key terms i refer to where given to us on the  project brief we where sent by Mrs Merrick. Below is a screen shot of what we was instructed to try and include.

Here is a script i wrote out in the lesson before we where intended to do our pitch. During though, I didn't stick to it as i rushed it and got straight to key points, i simply picked out the most important parts and improvise from there.

"Our initial brief is to create a 60 minute radio show, which will give us 7.5 minutes individually to create our own part to it about a topic that is appropriate to our target audience, which is teachers, pupils and parents. During my 7.5 minute slot, i plan to discuss interesting and exciting news or facts about teachers here at Bluecoat that pupils didn't know, in other words teacher profiling. The aim of this is to provide a fun and more exciting touch to the 60 minute mix we are creating. To involve the students i will create a survey to find out what sort of topics they want to hear about the teachers and what they want to hear about specifically. A suggestion made was to talk about teachers careers before they got into teaching, for example Mr Cook the PE teacher used to be a proffesional swimmer before he got into teaching. Questions like this will not only be interesting but could inspire the students to fulfill their dream jobs and know that it is possible to achieve.The teachers will be shown as a role model and an admirer to the pupils. This will hit the target of what our most important target audience will want to hear from my slot. The questions I will ask the teachers will be appropriate in regards to there ethnicity religion and gender to ensure no-one is offended. For this project we dont have a set budget and it will take place withing the school. We will record interviews either in the studio or with ipads to get the best quality for our show. I also plan to do a vox or questionnaire that the teachers, parents and students cant get involved with so i have a wider knowledge and idea of what to talk about within my interview."